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Ryouki-chan

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he can make the song on guitat hero world tour it allows u to __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

Kabuto

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What? Put it on his iPod? __________________ I'm ANNOYING,GOT IT MEMORIZED?

Ryouki-chan

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its good, but verse 3 dosent fit in that well-the beginning and middle cant u see it as an amv 4 vk w zero or kaname? it will do good w a loooot of animes __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

tforvampire

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i know...i overreact too...so don't worry...i'm just overly sensitive...any bit of sadness i feel is going to make me feel like dying!!! but i know better than to do it...i have my whole life ahead of me...and i'm not going to let one problem end it... __________________

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Songs usually reflect on somebodys thoughts. Yeah, I worry a lot. Would you rather me say ' Oh that's so cool, are you gonna kill yourself?' Pfft, I'm not gonna do that. It's NOTHING to be taken lightly. -- Edited by Dead fish on Sunday 22nd of March 2009 12:43:03 PM __________________ ~Ku Ku Kachu n_n

tforvampire

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OMG!!! it just a song!!!!! __________________

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Don't do that. Seriously, who would it benefit? __________________ ~Ku Ku Kachu n_n

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=D I think it'd fit right in on Zexi's iPod. __________________ I'm ANNOYING,GOT IT MEMORIZED?

tforvampire

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i just wrote this song...i want to know if its any good!

Last Goodbye

(*You’ve got 1 new voice message)

Verse I:

My dreadful tears run down

Like bullets, only more painful

I am blamed for my sorrow

And I’ll end it now […]

Before it’s too late

As blood keeps piling out,

From my wrist to the floor,

I realize the damage is done

I’m in too deep […]

And it’s time to say goodbye

Inserted in my wrist;

A knife […] shinny and bloody,

It’s in too deep

The cut is too deep

And I know it won’t mend […]

Chorus:

I would have stopped,

But it felt right;

Now I write this as:

“My Last Goodbye”

I won’t regret it

I’m running out of time

Just know I loved you

But I won’t miss you

I know this is right

I don’t belong here […]

Verse II:

I have formed a pool of blood

And I intend to […]

I will,

Drown in it […]

Don’t forget I warned you

Don’t try to stop me for,

When you get here

It’ll be too late;

I quickly lose blood […]

Here comes the end

I can feel my heart

Slowing down

Threatening my message

I hope it gives me enough

Time to say […]

Chorus:

I would have stopped,

But it felt right;

Now I write this as:

“My Last Goodbye”

I won’t regret it

I’m running out of time

Just know I loved you

But I won’t miss you

I know this is right

I don’t belong here […]

Verse III:

I’m sure I’m not the only one

Many will benefit from this

It’ll give international relief

Not to have to

Deal with my daily grief

I will hold my breath

And slowly die

Soon I’ll be all out of blood

And I’ll shed my last tear

Chorus:

I would have stopped,

But it felt right;

Now I write this as:

“My Last Goodbye”

I won’t regret it

I’m running out of time

Just know I loved you

But I won’t miss you

I know this is right

I don’t belong here […]

(Whisper: “goodbye”)

(*End of messages, to delete this message press […])

-- Edited by tforvampire on Saturday 21st of March 2009 09:49:35 AM

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