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Nova Pheonix

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just wanted to get the winner __________________

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i think it was t4uvampire..... i donno any way nova, isn't this where u unsticky this topic and close it / XD __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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who wins this one? __________________

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an eaisier way to upload it -so it doesn't create a huge mess here, it to go to fanfiction.com and create an account. __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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i should probably start passing all my story from notebook to computer... when should i upload it i mean the whole thing __________________

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ill continue it when i feel like it.............>_> __________________

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U SHOULD CONTIUE THAT STORY! EVEN IF I SAY ITLL BE ALRIGHT, STILL I HEAR YOU SAY U WILL END UR LIFE MABY WE WILL TURN IT AROUND CAUSE ITS NOT TO LAT, ITS NEVER TOO LATE... __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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I VOTE FOR ZETSU 8D (By any chances, do you know anybody named Alec, at soccer?) __________________ ~Ku Ku Kachu n_n

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Here is Zetsu's magical talre :P

Once apon a plant,on a magical field, was a patch of potatoes. The harvest season was finaly over and the potatoes hatched from there shell. The old wise pumkin once told me about a potatoe possessinga mistical power.
Once the seeds were planted,I waited, for months and through the winter until........BAM!!! A meteor just smashed the farm thankfully, no one was injured. Except the seed that was cracked open. a potatoes rised. We now call him Potahtoe.He was a hero to all vegitables every where.

This is where the awsome adventure begins....

''HaHaHa i just pwned you in Kick-the-Kan...your hopless potahtoe''.

''I don't care...:( I will beat you some day Bob''potahtoe replied.

Later doesBob and Potahtoe realise whata strange adventure they will be encountering. ...

well thats it : P

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thanxz xD __________________

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Bafum Dha is awesome Nice story " __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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tell me what you think ^^ btw... the last paragraph is just an inside story so that you understand better. it is not part of the preview. __________________

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Kumai, a semi-ordinary barely teenage girl, founds a diary on her way home from school. It seems like an old diary, but still Kumai doesnt throw it out. She examines it carefully and notices no page has anything written in it...except for one page right in the middle of the diary. It has the question "Would you give your life, to save another?". This question makes her think until she cant anymore. Such a short and simple question with such a difficult answer. She decides that her answer is yes, and writes it down right under the question. As she writes, she begins to feel a rush of energy through her body. The diary closes and an envelope falls out of it. She reads the letter inside slowly, and notices that it is a suicide note, from herself, to her mom. She begins to panic and slowly starts to vanish. she falls unconcious and later wakes up in a dark room where they question her. Later, Someone knocks her out again and takes her away. By the time she wakes up, she is being carried by an odd man named Jawn. This man takes her to vampirevillage, an old country which used to be dominated by vampires but was attacked by warewolves. These werewolves began to mix with vampire slaves. This mix was later called grounts. They enter a bar and she looks around. There are a bung of hairy, wolf-like creatures(grounts). One of them recognizes Jawn as a vampire from the Tskuh clan and immediately attacks. Then Jawn and Kumai are taken as prisoners to the gda[grount distribution association]which they later escape to continue their journey, but the problem is...they are being followed.

This whole story happens in a form of underworld. After the vampires were attacked, they settled somewhere else and named their land Vampia Terra. Soom after that, some vampires became sick of the laws of the vampia terra and separated into clans. The four clans were formed and each had a simbol. They agreed to stay united as vampia terra but each had a territory of their own. Every 5 years or so, all the vampires would meet to secure and discuss the welfare of the Vampia Terra. The four clans were to be called after the most precious value of their community. One clan was named Tskuh Dha which meant blood clan[this clan kept the blood of their own in a jar on their grave and waited for its evaporation as by giving the dead an afterlife]. Another was named Naraa Dha which meant soul clan[this clan believed that if the body was burried under a house, then the souls of the dead would come visit and spread victory around the home]. The next was named Daronda Dha meaning death clan[this clan never left the name of the dead out. They looked up to death as an honor]. The final one was named Bafum Dha for fire clan[this clan valued fire as the symbol of hope].

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im gonna post a preview of what my story is about...so far, its 11 chapters long... __________________

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Mikan was in a slump. She is the best in the business and achieved her goal. It was a long and hard road, but she accomplished it for 2 years. Yet she felt that she was missing something. Mikan is an undine. After about five years, she was honored the name of “Water Fairy” it meant that she is the best undine ever. Mikan was happy with the name, but it didn’t last long. She felt trapped and her “self” disappeared somewhere. Mikan enjoyed her job to the limits and beyond. However, that made her have almost no time for herself. What little free-time she had, she spent it on gondola rowing. That is, until one rainy day in the spring.
“Hunh? Rain? But it’s sunny out! Look, there’s the sun, but there is rain.” Exclaimed Mikan. “Aaah! A sun shower! The fox takes a bride, who’s the ‘lucky’ contestant that gets to act with the actor? Heh, maybe it’s that doll!” Mikan now was playing in the rain and looked towards the sea. A huge doll seemed to be sitting on the cement dock, looking towards the ocean.
Mikan wondered what the doll was doing, were it came from, why no one noticed it, and stared at it until the rain cleared, for it looked familiar. It was getting near the time for her next appointment, so she went inside her company’s building to get ready. (Every undine belonged to a company where the undines live. It is like a dorm school but with classes only about rowing a gondola. Full-fledged undines didn’t have to go to these classes, they went straight to work.)
Daily, Mikan stared at the doll who observed the ocean. Everyday Ms. Ningyo would be in a different position than the last. (Mikan wanted to name the doll, so she did) On the 31st of the month, it rained. It wasn’t a sun shower at all. Torrents of rain swept the city. Civilians were all inside. The city turned into a ghost town. Everywhere but the doll was drenched in water. Mikan was tired from running back to her company and the rain made her dazed. Half asleep, she took her umbrella and strolled to the doll. Ms. Ningyo had straight, short black hair and was wearing a white and blue kimono. As Mikan reached her, she turned her head. Mikan’s umbrella flew out of her hand as a strong gale hit her, and touched the water gently even though there were violent waves present. Ms. Ningyo whispered, “Thank you, Mikan.” She then got up, took Mikan’s umbrella and drifted on it, towards the mirage of a city that faded into the water. With every minute, Ms. Ningyo changed. She became more life like. Mikan’s last image of her was a smiling wave with the mirage and a black cat-like shape behind her whose red eyes shimmered as it watched Mikan closely. The sky cleared, clouds broke, and sun shimmered down.
In the next few days, Mikan prepared to leave. Even though it was for a few seconds, she wanted to meet that cat-like image again. The only way she could think of was to get rid of her slump, so she did. The first step was to quit her company. Mikan loved it, but suffocated underneath its roof. It wasn’t for her and Mikan now knew she felt misplaced. When her letter reached the office a cold wind burned. Mikan turned around but no one was there. She wondered who created it and how, for it couldn’t have been nature because it was summer. Mikan ignored it and stepped out her company. She looked back and screamed, “Goodbye Mr. Company!”
As the days grew closer to Mikan’s goal, her feeling of being watched increased. She got permits to a small square peninsula and began to build on it. The feeling however, increased. Whenever Mikan needed anything, it would appear in front of her. Also, in the morning when she went back to construct her building, some of it would be finished. After about thirteen days of random constructing, the building was complete. It was a little house, but with a company sign on it. Her company was created. All paper work, uniforms, furniture, landscaping, and everything else was completed. It was to start making appointments today. Mikan sat down and rested for a bit. It was noon and the temperature sky rocketed as a knock was heard.
“It’s coming from the door. Aah, maybe it’s a customer. But wouldn’t they be calling first? They must’ve forgotten the number, or wanted a peek at this simply gorgeous place!” Mikan thought and/or said this aloud as she ambled to the door. Mikan gasped when she saw who was knocking.
“Heard from my sister that you needed help with this.” He snorted and added,” Oh, you do need my help, I mean, look at this unsightly place.”
“ Na-Natsume” Mikan, shocked, poked him to prove he was real.
“Heh, so you remember. She said “hi” and that she is grateful to you for setting her free. So what do you need help with?” Natsume then walked towards the sofa and sat down.
Mikan reminded herself that she was angered by his remarks about this place and almost shouted,” Everything you dork! Oh wait…” She grinned evilly and put her plan into action. “Natsume, since you wanted to help me, you will be my first employee. I need one to start working, and there isn’t anyone more qualified than you.”
Natsume bluntly replied, “No.” Mikan then began to argue with him until they both reached an agreement where Mikan won.
“Oh yeah, hey, Natsume, your work begins tomorrow. Be ready to make no mistakes or you don’t get paid.” Laughed Mikan. Natsume ignored this, and went outside to practice. Mikan then closed her eyes and dreamed of tomorrow.

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check the other drawin contest the prize is money - 350$ ! -- Edited by Ryouki-chan at 07:09, 2009-01-14 __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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january 25 __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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When is the end date??? __________________

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yeah it can im in the middle of making mine, it hasn't been well cause of mid terms.... __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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Pls send me a private message cuz I don't really check topics __________________

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Can it be just a simple story??? My story is not done. And so far it's 10 ch. Long... __________________

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that was part of it it accedentally ended in the perfect place due to space __________________

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nice. __________________ 私は和美午前... 私はアーティストだ...

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Charm Strip

Ch1
Nova shot out of bed and whipped his shirt on “wonder what's gonna happen today” he said walking into his small bathroom. He lived in Pheonix academy,a school that only he and his friends attend. Recently the school built a second floor so nova and company would have to stay,due to the outrageous number of absences nova had accumulated. nova looked at himself in the mirror,short black hair,soft brown eyes,and his favorite red shirt. Nova ran down the stairs,very exited to get to class.

he bumped into his best friend Jack [who doesn't have a last name] “nova,you got to watch it!” jack sneered at him
nova looked up at him “why are you still wearing that!” he grabbed the red cap on his head,Jack glared at him with his cold purple eyes “i feel like it” he pulled nova's hand off and they walked to the classroom

nova sat down in the classroom and glanced at his four friends,Jack sat behind him,Nancy with her long blond hair and white shirt sat to his side,behind her was Rob,her brother his hair was a darker blond and he wore a green shirt,rob also had a green katana tied to his jeans,Jon,who sat in the front had ruffly brown hair.

Jack scratched at his cap “where's the teacher!?”
Rob rolled his eyes “late again..”
nova was already sleeping on his desk as usual
the doorknob twisted and the door opened

a girl who was only a little taller than the teens of the class “hey everyone” she smiled and waved. She woke a brown jacket and a white undershirt,her long green hair was tied in a ponytail. the teacher walked over to the white board and took a green marker and wrote “Ms. Kyside” on the board in fancy cursive writing
jack raised his hand,and kyside turned her head slightly “hm?”
“this is the end of the first week..we know your name..plus...” kyside walked over cutting him off,kyside was one of nova's enemies and she replaced their old teacher. She looked down and glared at him with large topaz eyes “the more I write my name the more you'll think about me” she smiled slightly and walked
back to her desk,and sat carefully in her chair.
Rob sighed and sat back in his chair “what crazy lesson do we get before the weekend?” he asked hypothetically,kyside laughed a bit “good thing you asked!”

Jon looked at her “what is it?”
Nancy quivered “is it dangerous?”
nova's eyes shot open “i hope so!”
kyside sighed “you aren't going home this weekend”
“what!” jack growled
“are you serious?!” Jon whined
“don't be sad...” her eyes lit up “we're going on a field trip!”

“where...” jack asked curiously ”you'll find out later” she answered
“really” jack stood up “last year you took us to the Volcano Of Fire”
“so” kyside blinked “you tried to push us in!” he yelled
“I've never heard of a volcano of fire” Nancy said
“that's because it exploded!” nova made a exploding noise and waved his arms around
“see,he thought it was fun” kyside looked
“he thinks any adventure is fun” jack scratched his cap as he sat down

kyside looked at him “you should take that off,you look cuter without it” she grinned
jack griped his hat “no!” “i already told him” nova said
jack tried to change to change the subject “did you plan this trip?”
kyside bent down and pulled open a drawer. She hummed as she pulled out a dark green folder,same color as her hair. Green was her favorite color. She placed the folder on her desk “all in here” he ran her hand across the folder

“how are we getting there?” Jon asked
“a bus” kyside smiled

CH 2
E veryone walked out the door of the classroom “this'll be fun” kyside led the other five down the hall “hey nova..you wanna sit next to me on the bus” she looked back at him
“no” nova said dully
“please” she begged “i have extra food” she held up a brown bag
“no” jack said “stop crushing on him”
kyside blushed a bit,then she faced forward again

the front doors opened and there was a small bus outside,painted green with a
red Pheonix painted on the side
“let's go!” kyside rushed everyone to the bus,but everyone walked slowly to the vehicle

Rob was the first one to get to the bus. He looked at the bus door,it was damaged,battered,and scraped. He also noticed it was the only part that wasn't painted “is this bus safe?” he looked at kyside
“well I got it off a scrapyard..for six bucks and some...persuasion” kyside made it to the door also

she waved her arm to the side and the door opened,it wasn't motion sensitive..it opened like magic,in fact it was magic.
Kyside was a witch,a REAL one and was raised by her brother Raven who was a half-dark angel. She came from the Dark Family that Raven established to train solders and slaves for his family. After he died his two daughters inherited the family,kyside's older sister Rose was next in line to rule.

Nova ran into the bus as soon as the door opened “woo!”
Nancy walked in quietly
Rob walked in after her
kyside glanced at rob and saw the katana “no weapons on the field trip”

“jack and nova have weapons too!” rob protested
kyside sighed “fine..considering it's you guys I'll let you off”
rob walked into the broken bus

as jack walked by,kyside tried to grab his hat
jack grabbed her arm,with his other hand he twirled out a dagger from one of the two holsters on his jeans and griped it above her arm “don't!” he let go and
walked into the bus twirling the dagger back into it's holder

Jon walked up to the open door,nervous and sweating
“are you scared?” kyside asked nicely looking down at him
Jon ignored her and walked into the bus,she scared him the most

kyside stood at the front of the bus,there was only enough room for the six of them“you'll find backpacks under your seat” she moved her arm downward
everyone pulled the backpacks from under them
“first you'll find a rule list” she pulled out a page from the folder
and read them aloud

“1.don't separate from your partner...who is whoever sits next to you”
Jack sat next to nova “cool” nova glanced at jack
Nancy was with Rob,Nancy smiled..rob always protected her
“no...that means...” Jon realized he must be paired with kyside

“2.don't go into the cave”
jack knew of only one cave “we're going to the Dragon Claw mountains! Where
the Cave of Death is!”
nova looked exited “we get to go back there?!”
“wrong!” kyside sung
nova's head fell “darn”

“3..don't talk to ANYONE outside of the group”
rob raised an eyebrow ”..there are others?”

“4.we meet at the lake for lunch”
everyone was silent

“finally # 5.......DON'T DIE”
Jack scoffed
Jon yelped “die?!”
nova looked at kyside “this sounds like fun now!”
she put the paper back in the folder and pulled out some earmuffs

“what are those for?” jack asked
“you'll find one in your backpack” kyside tried to ignore the question
“what are they for!” rob yelled
“it might get cold...” she slipped them on like she was modeling them
“not likely..considering the fact that there is a lake that's not frozen off..we won't need them” jack said
“fine” she grinned and put them away

rob raised his hand “who's driving?”
kyside sat in the drivers seat “me”
“what!” jack yelled “your fourteen,you have no driver's license and..now that I think about it..you shouldn't have a teaching license ether”

“any other questions?” kyside ignored him again
“where are we going?” nova asked
“the Charm Strip..it contains a lake,a forest and a desert” she answered
“oh sure...” jack sighed “you tell HIM where we're going..”

“okay let's go!” kyside pushed on the gas and the bus start

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ok __________________

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yah that thing took up abot 10 pgs on word. so i deleted it __________________ 私は和美午前... 私はアーティストだ...

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my attention span is WAY too low read that __________________

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yea __________________

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yup __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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mine is the NJ mini novel the charm strip originally it was filer for the roleplay now it's a arc in the story __________________

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me 2 mines a clamp parody with a bit of gakun alice __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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i was going to say.... i'll submit in 2 dayz then __________________

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ok u need to wait 2 days -_- it sucks __________________ H I R A K U h a n a s h i A R I A " Itsu De Mo Kyo Wa Ichiban Tanoshii Hii " - Yotsuba from Yotsubato&!

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[not done yet] i'm using the maol email __________________

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